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Wen Nai’s passing by
Written at the top: galgame is a male-oriented beautiful girl love game with visual novels as the main carrier. In this forum, I will write some appreciation and recommendations of galgame plots as a learning exchange. First of all, the gal I play is not bad in writing. I am just throwing bricks here, and this article is only based on game discussion, without any description or allusion to the real world.
The first one I recommend is Navel’s “Etiquette of Nearly Moon Girls” series. This game won the Gold Award of the Annual Beautiful Girl Game Awards in 2013. Its heroine Sakura Koji Luna has been the most popular Getchu character for three consecutive years. The work mainly tells the story of the male protagonist Dazang Yusei under the pseudonym Ogura Asahi and the female protagonist Sakura Koji Luna entering Philia Women’s Academy to study clothing making. It is also a representative work of this kind of theme. The order of play is near month 1-theory-post theory-near month 2-2.1-2.2.
First of all, there are some comments without spoilers. In fact, I didn’t really want to play this kind of work at the beginning. After all, it is really difficult to replace the male protagonist with this kind of theme, but what distinguishes this game from other games with the same theme is that he deliberately creates a sense of alienation in the process. Really lowered the barrier to entry. Then there is the very old-fashioned painting style, which can only be said to be a matter of opinion, anyway, I got used to it after playing for a while. The plot is very exciting, Luna in Maoyi is very emotional, and there are many classic songs in the soundtrack.
Next is the part of plot appreciation. In this column, I will write the story of the whole generation (including the theory after the first generation and as), not to mention the second generation because the space is limited, and on the other hand, although the plot of the second generation is very good (except for the sister line), it is a little less amazing than the first generation.
Part of “Etiquette of Nearly Moon Girls” (spoiler warning)
I think the best point of the first month is the grasp of the plot rhythm, which is also the most difficult part of the galgame script. If the narration is too slow, the plot will be clear, and if it is too fast, it will lose some of the emotional changes of the characters and daily love (call and criticize 9nine Xuexuexue), but this one is well grasped. Apart from the regular emotional lines, there are also the foreshadowing of sneaking into the academy and Yiyuan, as well as the small main line of the coursework. (Anyway, I was playing quite sleeplessly).
In terms of character creation, Asahi and Luna of the first generation have similar experiences but completely different personalities. The biggest reason for this distinction is family affection. Although Asahi has lived in an indifferent environment since she was a child, she still has the care of her mother. Asahi’s mother taught Asahi to be a useful person to others since she was a child, and she still encouraged Asahi. Luna’s biological mother has always treated Luna as a different kind because of her hair, and her feelings towards Luna are only guilt rather than caring. In addition, she also teaches kindness. The purpose of Maru’s role as a mother by Luna’s side is to make profits for herself. Later, she also failed Luna’s trust, so Luna’s character became paranoid, withdrawn and indifferent. Later, with the help of Yachiyo and his friends, he barely integrated into social life. But it was the encounter with Asahi that really changed Luna.
Compared with writing about the main line of family struggle in detail in theory, the relationship line between Asahi and Luna was more prominent in recent month 1 (only the line of Luna was pushed), and the matter of the big collector was not mentioned much. Therefore, some supporting roles have been flattened. For example, Yi Yuan is a mean villain, and Li Xiangnai is a classic venomous-tongued brother-control house girl (maybe it has become a classic character design since recent months), and they are also tools to promote the plot. The stories of these two (especially Yi Yuan) will be told in detail in theories that focus on family drama.
In terms of the plot, since Luna was a child, the topic of hair color has always been her pain point, and Asahi’s ability to accept this has become the starting point for the two to get acquainted. As the two get along, Luna gradually trusts Asahi’s loyalty. And this point of complete trust is also the time when the two are alone after the final entry option. But here it is only the transformation from servant to friend. The transformation from trust to trust is when Marumu came to school. With Asahi’s company, Luna bid farewell to the past. After rejecting Marume, she had a conversation with Asahi. It was the person who peeped into Luna’s heart and filled the “hole in her heart” at this time. At this time, the two crossed the boundary and made a vow. After that, there was a short posting routine, but the foreshadowing of the main line before here was withdrawn. Yiyuan revealed the truth and took Asahi away, but even so, Asahi still “hoped to get Yiyuan’s approval” rather than loathing Yiyuan. Of course, it was Asahi’s kindness in the past that made everyone in the Sakura Mansion not hate Asahi after discovering the truth, especially Luna might still be secretly happy when she learned the truth (after all, she had been worried that she would be turned around). He also frankly faced his feelings of cherishing Asahi, until the later part of the night party, the two really connected with each other (露娜癌最严重的一次). In the end, just as Asahi thought, he got Yiyuan’s approval through his own talent and stayed with Luna. Here I have to mention Stanley. As the person who changed Asahi, he was also the person Asahi followed before the main story started. He has also been watching Asahi’s growth. One can glimpse a little of Yiyuan’s character here. In the story of the whole generation, people of Stanley’s generation have a lot of memories of those years, but it is not mentioned in the first generation. The background stories of supporting characters such as Sasha, Loveray, and Cecil are very interesting, so I won’t go into details here. Regarding the Luna line, there are still some pitfalls that have not been filled. These are all mentioned in the AS. Although Luna still looks down on Yiyuan in the AS (it’s disgusting, a big collector), the relationship with Yiyuan has been eased (maybe it has something to do with the fact that Yiyuan is whitewashed in the theoretical plot. Personally, I don’t think it’s whitewashing but I know Yiyuan’s difficulties). asas is the graduation party, (in the lovers line) Asahi officially let go of the identity of Ogura Asahi, and lived with Luna as Dazang Yuxing. So far, the whole story has ushered in he (虽然我还没玩够，露娜癌又犯了再去推一遍).
Part of “Girl Theory and Its Surroundings”
Li Xiangnai, a generation of tool people, has finally ushered in his home field. (Although it is the if line) I really wanted to push但是玩少女理论的时候已经露娜癌晚期了，天天想着见露娜sama the first month.
In terms of characters, Li Sang Nai’s persona is a classic house girl controlled by a poisonous brother, but Li Sang Nai’s experience is very different from Asahi’s. She is also in the family of a great collector, and Asahi can at least get the care of her mother, while Li Sang Nai is the orthodox blood of the great Tibetan family, but she was only cultivated as a tool to maintain the family’s image and family interests since she was a child. The relationship between her mother and her also stays in helping her pay. Therefore, after being helped by Asahi when she was a child, her favorability was immediately full. After all, she was in a deep boudoir, and Asahi had never seen someone who showed concern for her. Therefore, after she separated from Asahi, she continued to attack herself and became a complete brother control.
But in fact, the young Risana and Asahi had never met each other. Risana’s emotion is not so much admiration as longing for the Prince Charming in his fantasy. In reality, this kind of emotion will be ruthlessly torn apart, but this is the second dimension. Therefore, the emotional line of Lixiang Nai line is not always full of favorability from the beginning, which can also be seen from the changes in the details of the attitude before and after.
In addition to emotions, Li Xiangna’s own transformation is not only due to Asahi’s company, but also the help of friends (especially Meryl, who is too cute and Li Xiangna can’t bear to tease). It was also with their help that Li Xiangnai gradually recovered her friendship and the way to really get along with others, that is, the precious trust between people. Of course, the transformation of the character of Risana will not be so simple. One of the key parts of Risana’s line is that after being squeezed out by her classmates, she was squeezed out by Lilianu, but the plot is quite old-fashioned. I think it’s time to figure out how to figure out the clever character of Li Xiangnai. Of course, it may be uncertain, and it is inevitable that he will doubt the students around him. In this part, Li Xiangnai completely entrusts his body and mind to Asahi, which is also the completion time of the transformation I mentioned above. Reciprocally, it was Asahi who gave Li Xiangna the courage to move forward, and also led her to find a little goal. So far, Xiangnai has completed her growth.
The emotional line of theory is not the main point, the most important thing is the main line of the family. This has to start with the story of Yi Yuan. At the end of the first generation, Xiang Nai said, “Luna sauce is almost like a female version of the big brother.” And when he knew that he was not from the blood of the great collector, he decided to monopolize the family property, and he also felt jealous of the talent flowing in the blood of the great collector, so he took talent as the only criterion in his life, which is why he abandoned Asahi and suppressed Risana. Because of his purpose and experience, he forced himself to cut off all emotion. In Nearly Month 2, I wrote about the story of Yi Yuan when he was young (in the append). At that time, he still cherished the bond between friends more than he does now. However, he also thought that this emotion needed to be let go, because in his big plan, he did not allow anyone else to be his possible weakness, and it may be that Yi Yuan did not want his affairs to affect them. I think this change in attitude is due to what he said to Yiyuan when Yachiyo left, which made him understand what he wanted to do and the price it meant, so he made up his mind to let go of this relationship, bid farewell to Yachiyo, and reject Alta ( painful, too painful ). By the 2nd of the last month, Asahi was about to have a grandson and was not married yet. Under such a personality, he ignored the goodwill of the Asahi, not to say that because he did not understand his kindness, but instead of accepting the bondage outside of any interests, he brought a thin mask and rejected all the kindness. At the beginning of the girl theory, he also completely regarded the Asahi as a tool person (because no generation of HE found that the Asian paper sample could only be found in He. The bridge section) is also disgusted and jealous of Lai Nai’s attitude (although it is not manifested, and said later). The change in the view of Asahi is that after the Patriarch wants to see Asahi, Asahi has changed from a useless person to an important part of his road to power (in fact, Yiyuan is very guilty of his attitude towards Asahi, and the second generation mentioned that he dotes on Chaoyang for this reason).
On the main line, the confrontation between Yiyuan and Junwo is concentrated on Asahi. Yiyuan needs to take Asahi away, and Junwo needs to stop Yiyuan to gain an advantage in the competition. The difference between Junwo, Ito and Asahi’s standpoints is that Utoshi wants to monopolize the family property, and Junwo hopes to stay with Asahi to create a family with affection, but has no intention of accepting Yiyuan, while Asahi hopes to impress everyone. Although Junwo’s side is more humane, Asahi still hopes to accept Yiyuan. The human touch on Junwo’s side is not only based on the position, but also someone set it up. Anthony, who was originally Junwo’s little follower, although he looks like a foolish playboy on the surface, can be found in the Meryl line. In fact, he is a very kind person (Junwo may also have changed, but I only pushed the sister line and Meryl line). In the relationship between Asahi and Yiyuan, Yiyuan’s emotional change still starts with the shirt made by Asahi. After sending the shirt, it is obvious that Yiyuan’s attitude has changed (although it is still arrogant). This shirt not only represents Asahi’s talent, but also represents the care of family affection. On the one hand, Yiyuan treats talented people equally, and Asahi’s heart is also the key to opening Yiyuan’s heart. Although he is not related by blood, Yiyuan can glimpse what he has lost.
Of course, before reaching cooperation with Yiyuan, the two also experienced a period of betrayal, which can be regarded as a classic plot. In recent months, both 12 and theory have been used, and the desperation of falling to the bottom is used to set off the preciousness of daily life. During this period of time, Asahi brought Risana to the cherry garden. This is also a comparison with the last time she came to the cherry garden. The last time Asahi brought Risana to the cherry garden in order to cheer up Risana. Cherry blossoms, as the flowers of their hometown, also symbolize their destination. It also corresponds to Risana’s ability to find spiritual comfort in such a place that symbolizes her hometown when she was rejected by foreigners in Paris because of her identity. The same is true for Asahi, the cherry blossoms still mean that woman to him, and when he came here for the second time, the cherry blossoms that symbolized the destination fell off, which also corresponds to the plot where the two can only separate in the face of external oppression. But at this moment, under the only blooming cherry tree, the woman who belongs to the same hometown as them came, brought their hope, and reawakened my Luna cancer ( I can only say that it is worthy of being the real heroine who won the most popular personal line among other heroines. Luna’s personal charm is indeed great ). In the end, Asahi persuaded Yiyuan to form a united front with himself under equal status, and also went to England to face his family. Until the dinner party, we could clearly see that it was Asahi and his cherishment of family affection and the kindness that accompanied him from beginning to end. Without Asahi, it would be impossible for Yi Yuanjun and I to think that the three of them could reach a consensus. That is to say, in this section of the family line, the theme that runs through the whole generation of stories is the most prominent.
So aside from the master-servant Silian and the daily talk of posting, what exactly does the first generation want to express in recent months?
As mentioned above, whether it is the emotional line or the main line, the series in recent months has talked about caring for others, such as the importance of family affection that can be clearly seen in the background of the characters. As one of the few Dazang family members whose personality is not distorted, Asahi’s kindness and tenderness to others comes from his mother’s teachings. The children born are not entirely of the blood of the great collector, which broadens the relationship, not only family affection, but also Asahi’s care for the unrelated Yi Yuan, and also Asahi’s dedication behind the heroine in each generation of emotional story lines. The relationship between the hero and the heroine is just like the design and paper patterns that they are good at. The process of approaching, and the description in the first generation of the month is the process of Asahi gradually melting the frozen heart of the heroine with his own enthusiasm. It is exactly what the author wants to convey, that society can reach a harmonious state only in mutual care, because the second dimension is an idealized world, and Asahi always insists on creating such a beautiful family ideal, because just like before the story of a generation begins, although people are selfish in nature, a selfish family is indifferent and lacks care.
As for the reasons for doing this, I would like to give you a sentence from Kant: “The reason why we are a moral person is not to pursue happiness, but because this itself is worthy of the happiness we already have.”
Finally, I will always love Luna sama, thank you for reading.
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